It is all about subtext! For a moment I thought I'd missed an opportunity for one of their long, lingering looks, but I got a bit of one in...
Thank you for the great feedback - I do try to avoid the trap of telling too much rather than revealing, but it doesn't always work, particularly in exposition. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Thank you for the great feedback - I do try to avoid the trap of telling too much rather than revealing, but it doesn't always work, particularly in exposition. I'm glad you enjoyed it!